Slow Funeral Days
The untuned piano teeth plunk like sunlight spirit gummed to a pile of dusty books on which someone has x'ed and o'ed their way to a draw. My thoughts u-turn down one way streets. I picture you...
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Nice, Hadley. A fairly brief poem that provides a fine snapshot of family life and interests. Good work. Considering the hyphen in "u-turn" I would also advise hyphenating as "one-way streets."...
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H---the first six lines make no sense---a terrible crime against imagery. (this from a man who says he has never met a metaphor he didn't like....Derek Walcott says the same thing...LOL)The untuned...
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thanks bernie and chris i haven't been writing much recently -- scribbled this on an envelope yesterday morning...will try and make something of it perhaps metaphors be with you!
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