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Slow Funeral Days

The untuned piano teeth plunk like sunlight spirit gummed to a pile of dusty books on which someone has x'ed and o'ed their way to a draw. My thoughts u-turn down one way streets. I picture you...

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 Nice, Hadley.  A fairly brief poem that provides a fine snapshot of family life and interests.  Good work.  Considering the hyphen in "u-turn" I would also advise hyphenating as "one-way streets."...

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H---the first six lines make no sense---a terrible crime against imagery.  (this from a man who says he has never met a metaphor he didn't like....Derek Walcott says the same thing...LOL)The untuned...

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thanks bernie and chris i haven't been writing much recently -- scribbled this on an envelope yesterday morning...will try and make something of it perhaps metaphors be with you!

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